DISQUS

Ciara's Ramblings and Whatnot: It's Flash Fiction and Fatherhood Friday Time. Guess What? I'm Gonna Be a Rebel.

  • Mr_Knowitall · 2 months ago
    Excellent Flash 355 Ciara Mist!!!
    Loved your story, I had to pee half way thru it though!
    Have a Great Week-End....G
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    haha @ flash 355...and you had to pee half way thru it??? how rude! my baby's song is the best part. ;0)
  • Anthony North · 2 months ago
    Some kids just naturally think deep. They usually do very well for themselves.
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    i'm always amazed when she comes up w stuff like this, because she's usually a more of a daydreamer and sees good in everything & everyone. i love it when she writes :0)
  • chefkar · 2 months ago
    Amazing what comes from the mouths (or pens) of babes. I have a daughter who is also a deep thinker. She writes and expresses herself beautifully.

    Mine are here. Have a great weekend.

    Chef Kar
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    isn't it though? i always thought it would be the 12 yo that would be the writer cos she was always stronger in school...but to be honest, she's not much of a writer at all lol she knows it, too. she was surprised her sister could come up with words like this or from the one i linked in the post. i love the surprises i find in my kids :0) my 22 yo son writes as well, but his stuff is 'different' lol
  • janiewoods · 2 months ago
    Beautiful!!!
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    thanks, guns!
  • Robyn's Online World · 2 months ago
    That is great! Maybe she seems carefree on the outside but keeps some things inside - this is her way of letting them out in a controlled way. I hope one of you are keeping all those wonderful things together in a journal or collection, etc.
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    oh i definitely keep them! :0) i just always think it's weird that she writes about relationships and stuff when she's only 10 and is not as interested in boys as the 12 yo is lol she thinks they're cute, but she has said that she is too young for a boyfriend. sometimes i wonder if she's more mature than i give her credit for.
  • oneprayergirl · 2 months ago
    My thought is that the younger a person is, the closer they are to their true creation, their true inner selves - emotions, thoughts, and understanding.

    I used to sing whatever was in my heart and mind when I was very young.

    Beautiful!!

    PG
  • ciaraj · 2 months ago
    i agree, pg...it's when we get older and are affected by peers, society, etc., that some of the pureness is lost. i hope my daughter never loses the creativity she has inside her. thx for stopping by :0)
  • weaselmomma · 2 months ago
    Wow! That came from a 10 year old? Let her keep day dreaming. Girl has got talent. Heartbreaking talent, but talent. Go hug that kid!
  • TexasLisa972 · 2 months ago
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